a bit of new poetry "That one cold morning"

[Artsinlife]

..Just sending another work of mine.. I am still looking for a musician able to put some of my works to music; if there were any willing to do this, feel free to contact me. Thank you (for reading She as well)
Happy Christmas to everyone here!

So cold is the morning
In the city of strangers
Where there's no forgiving
For two souls among others

You walked out the door
And hoped to be forgotten
By someone who lived for
That very last moment

Have you ever known that?
Did you ever go back?

You left me there dying
Of the words as sharp as a knife
In the room of kind lying
You enter just once in your life...©

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[danishdog]

This is very Cohenesque, and I like it. It reminds me a bit of "Samson in New Orleans". I hope you find someone to put music to it.

Duncan

[Artsinlife]

Hello Duncan, thank you for your nice comment, I appreciate it very much (though I would never dare compare my writing to that of Leonard, not even a little I have not realized similarities with Samson, but maybe there are some, since a lot of things we read and listen to influence us unconsciously.