Follow the leaves down

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Phil Rose
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Follow the leaves down

Post by Phil Rose »

Follow the leaves down

You’ll follow the leaves down
As they fall silently to the ground

The echo of the wind is the only sound
As the leaves fall to a new place found

You’ll rise up with the sun
Into a new life just begun
Marisha
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Joined: Fri May 02, 2008 8:26 pm

Re: Follow the leaves down

Post by Marisha »

I wonder if the leaves are rose leaves! this is my favourite poem so far, no suicide, no sadness, just happy happy sunshine outlook on life, well done!

here is my extra verse- hope you like it

when the rain goes away
it brightens my day
when the snow melts to rain
I'm happy again!
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