The Infinite Haiku

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six, seven, eight, nine
- for sensuality, this
thread is a 10-plus

(second only to Colonial Suicide, of course... or as the BBC says 'seeeyewicide'.)
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thread is a ten plus
but still it's thinner than wool
I can't knit with it
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tinderella wrote:thread is a ten plus
but still it's thinner than wool
I can't knit with it

I can't knit with it
'scratched', 'screeched', 'scrounged', 'scrunched', 'strengths', 'stretched', 'straights'
all words that don't fit
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all words that dont fit
but make my teeth feel on edge
when I recite them
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tinderella wrote:all words that dont fit
but make my teeth feel on edge
when I recite them

when I recite them
excite them and incite them
your breasts, can I bite them?
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extra syllable in that last line harry :D
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will try again

when i recite them
the words of Leonard Cohen
'I breathe the fragrance'
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tinderella wrote:extra syllable in that last line harry :D

sorry, I got too carried away biting your breasts.


when I recite them
I fall into a deep sleep
your lines so boring
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tinderella wrote:will try again

when i recite them
the words of Leonard Cohen
'I breathe the fragrance'

I breathe the fragrance
of last night's beer on your breath
brush your teeth, woman
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Enjoyed your Barter's Hill haiku, MyMichelle. I'll be watching for more


Brush your teeth woman
orders the brash commander
she does not obey
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Thanks Scarlett for your comments :)


she does not obey
and whoever said she should
is full of dog crap
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is full of dog crap
the garden when the snow goes
new blades of iris
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new blades of iris
sunlight illuminating
pure green clarity
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anneporter wrote:new blades of iris
sunlight illuminating
pure green clarity
pure green clarity
lost to bipolarity
mood extremity
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mood extremity
metal arm and hinged fingers
touching grief of war
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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