The Infinite Haiku
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Re: The Infinite Haiku
six, seven, eight, nine
- for sensuality, this
thread is a 10-plus
(second only to Colonial Suicide, of course... or as the BBC says 'seeeyewicide'.)
- for sensuality, this
thread is a 10-plus
(second only to Colonial Suicide, of course... or as the BBC says 'seeeyewicide'.)
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thread is a ten plus
but still it's thinner than wool
I can't knit with it
but still it's thinner than wool
I can't knit with it
Re: The Infinite Haiku
tinderella wrote:thread is a ten plus
but still it's thinner than wool
I can't knit with it
I can't knit with it
'scratched', 'screeched', 'scrounged', 'scrunched', 'strengths', 'stretched', 'straights'
all words that don't fit
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all words that dont fit
but make my teeth feel on edge
when I recite them
but make my teeth feel on edge
when I recite them
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tinderella wrote:all words that dont fit
but make my teeth feel on edge
when I recite them
when I recite them
excite them and incite them
your breasts, can I bite them?
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extra syllable in that last line harry 

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will try again
when i recite them
the words of Leonard Cohen
'I breathe the fragrance'
when i recite them
the words of Leonard Cohen
'I breathe the fragrance'
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tinderella wrote:extra syllable in that last line harry
sorry, I got too carried away biting your breasts.
when I recite them
I fall into a deep sleep
your lines so boring
Re: The Infinite Haiku
tinderella wrote:will try again
when i recite them
the words of Leonard Cohen
'I breathe the fragrance'
I breathe the fragrance
of last night's beer on your breath
brush your teeth, woman
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Re: The Infinite Haiku
Enjoyed your Barter's Hill haiku, MyMichelle. I'll be watching for more
Brush your teeth woman
orders the brash commander
she does not obey
Brush your teeth woman
orders the brash commander
she does not obey
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Thanks Scarlett for your comments 
she does not obey
and whoever said she should
is full of dog crap

she does not obey
and whoever said she should
is full of dog crap
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is full of dog crap
the garden when the snow goes
new blades of iris
the garden when the snow goes
new blades of iris
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new blades of iris
sunlight illuminating
pure green clarity
sunlight illuminating
pure green clarity
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pure green clarityanneporter wrote:new blades of iris
sunlight illuminating
pure green clarity
lost to bipolarity
mood extremity
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mood extremity
metal arm and hinged fingers
touching grief of war
metal arm and hinged fingers
touching grief of war
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde