The Infinite Haiku

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feeding on small sins
his knees upon the pillow
she threw down for him
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she threw down for him
but then she threw up for him
password theft's real crime
Last edited by Harry S on Mon May 18, 2009 11:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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password theft's real crime
Jack the collaborator
must also be shot
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Harry S wrote:she threw down for him
then she threw up for him [this line really made me laugh] [just thought I'd mention it].. [continue all]..
password theft's real crime

edit: thought a smaller font would be easier on the eyes... also, as per Tinderella's remark below... Harry, you got counting troubles... v.
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must also be shot
beneath the sea as above
photographer's dream
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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Harry's lines are amusing but he seems to have trouble counting the syllables
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Photographer's dream
to be there at the moment
when the bud opens
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tinderella wrote:Harry's lines are amusing but he seems to have trouble counting the syllables


... good point!
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when the bud opens
we drink so much that we think
we are bud wiser
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we are bud wiser
this heat before the lily
open now this heart
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open now this heart
true happiness lies within
let me feel the love
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Let me feel the love
But don't forget to show me
The money also
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imaginary friend wrote:Let me feel the love
But don't forget to show me
The money also
the money also
fell to the floor, with my pants,
now stripped for action
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now stripped for action,
I say unto you Harry:
No money? No love.
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No money? No love?
Well then, what about humour?
Anyone out there?
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