The Infinite Haiku
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feeding on small sins
his knees upon the pillow
she threw down for him
his knees upon the pillow
she threw down for him
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she threw down for him
but then she threw up for him
password theft's real crime
but then she threw up for him
password theft's real crime
Last edited by Harry S on Mon May 18, 2009 11:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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password theft's real crime
Jack the collaborator
must also be shot
Jack the collaborator
must also be shot
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Harry S wrote:she threw down for him
then she threw up for him [this line really made me laugh] [just thought I'd mention it].. [continue all]..
password theft's real crime
edit: thought a smaller font would be easier on the eyes... also, as per Tinderella's remark below... Harry, you got counting troubles... v.
Last edited by Violet on Mon May 18, 2009 11:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Violet
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must also be shot
beneath the sea as above
photographer's dream
beneath the sea as above
photographer's dream
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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Harry's lines are amusing but he seems to have trouble counting the syllables
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Photographer's dream
to be there at the moment
when the bud opens
to be there at the moment
when the bud opens
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tinderella wrote:Harry's lines are amusing but he seems to have trouble counting the syllables
... good point!
Violet
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when the bud opens
we drink so much that we think
we are bud wiser
we drink so much that we think
we are bud wiser
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open now this heart
true happiness lies within
let me feel the love
true happiness lies within
let me feel the love
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Let me feel the love
But don't forget to show me
The money also
But don't forget to show me
The money also
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the money alsoimaginary friend wrote:Let me feel the love
But don't forget to show me
The money also
fell to the floor, with my pants,
now stripped for action
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now stripped for action,
I say unto you Harry:
No money? No love.
I say unto you Harry:
No money? No love.
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No money? No love?
Well then, what about humour?
Anyone out there?
Well then, what about humour?
Anyone out there?