The Poetry Comp. Winners

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mat james
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Mickey_one says (about poem 3)
Dear fellow judge, I presume the hiding is behind the shades but the robber knows what he has become. My difficulty here is that the poem is just too short. That and a near-compulsion to change the last line to read “bigger willy”
Mickey-one,
Leonard and Sigmund might agree with your comment on "bigger willy". The bigger "will" and the bigger "willy" seem to be integral to the process of creation! :razz:

Manna, I don't know about excluding the first two lines of my poem, but if that new avatar is really you, then I'll agree with anything you say!!! ;-)

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aw, gee whiz. You guys are so sweet. I love men, now get home to your wives, all of you!
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now get home to your wives,
How many wives do you think I have??
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One (1), but maybe none (0). I can't remember if you've ever said.
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just the one, Lucky girl! :)
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