Little Poems I wrote - Feedback Appreciated

[damellon]

You can't elope with Damellon.

Manna
Will you send me the list of people I can't elope with?

[Manna]

You can't elope with honeydew?

[mickey_one]

I am now so confused

Is Manna a cockney, I thought she was American

unless he is winding me up, Manna told me he came from the East End (not technically a Cockney) and supported the Orient, so it never ocurred to me that he was American.

[damellon]

Could I inadvertrntly post another "total bastard" compliment?

Joney
For the moment I hold the coveted title of 'total bastard', conferred on me by mickey_one yesterday. I will be happy to relinquish it tomorrow if you have a pressing need for it but allow me a few more hours in the spotlight..

[mickey_one]

You can't elope with honeydew?

you mean she cant elope with a jew, honey?

[mickey_one]

Could I inadvertrntly post another "total bastard" compliment?

Joney
For the moment I hold the coveted title of 'total bastard', conferred on me by mickey_one yesterday. I will be happy to relinquish it tomorrow if you have a pressing need for it but allow me a few more hours in the spotlight..

typical "total bastard" attitude, just bloody typical.

when I read her poem at the Green Note, I will introduce it as a piece written by a total bastard.

[Manna]

for dessert tonight, I plan to open a Jewish canteloupe and drizzle some honey in it.

[mickey_one]

for dessert tonight, I plan to open a Jewish canteloupe and drizzle some honey in it.

it's the honey season. I ate in my sukkah tonight and we had honey on the challah instead of salt.

[damellon]

You can't elope with honeydew?

Cant, (find)a loupe hole in the law - it says we're too closely related

[Manna]

sounds pretty sweet, M.

[damellon]

Could I inadvertrntly post another "total bastard" compliment?

Joney
For the moment I hold the coveted title of 'total bastard', conferred on me by mickey_one yesterday. I will be happy to relinquish it tomorrow if you have a pressing need for it but allow me a few more hours in the spotlight..

typical "total bastard" attitude, just bloody typical.

when I read her poem at the Green Note, I will introduce it as a piece written by a total bastard.

I may sue you

[damellon]

You can't elope with honeydew?

you mean she cant elope with a jew, honey?

A whole other category denied to me. Manna - could you issue badges? Don't want to invest too much time in wasters.

[Manna]

Hey, I said Joney couldn't elope with you. She's the only one. I didn't say you couldn't elope. You may elope with anyone else. Just not Joney. Joney belongs to Mr. McCourt, whose pet name for her is Honeydew. ok?

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ok, this is getting too convoluted, even for me. I need some refreshment.

[damellon]

Well why didn't you say that?

[Manna]

I'm sorry. I am under the influence of tea, coffee and this album called Colonial Cousins. It's amazing. Forgive me. Forgive me Krishna, forgive me Jesus. I will try to be more clear in the future. Will I ever go clear?