I Waited For You

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LauraL
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I Waited For You

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I Waited For You


In the shimmer of firelight,

woodsmoke and sweetgrass

rise

swirling, entwined, dancing,

I saw your eyes .

Deep in dream time,

blessed slumber

spirit waited.

Soothing murmur

of my Grandmothers

"it's time "

My heart stirs,

echoes in fire song.

Your whisper,

my name !

Great Mystery

I sent a voice

and you heard.

In gratitude

I dance towards the light.

My spirit sings it's joy.

Awakened,

beloved,

alive .

lauralinklater dec/2004
..saying your words were not empty ,
makes them no less hollow

littlecrow feb/07
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Ilike this poem
I Waited For You
In the shimmer of firelight,

woodsmoke and sweetgrass
rise
swirling, entwined, dancing,

I saw your eyes .
Deep in dream time
so sensual so eroticI

my soul.with your eyes.
infused like carbon
From a million years ago.

little diamonds in our minds
twinkling like stars
already dead like Mira

regards jimbo
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thankyou Jimbo !! :)
..saying your words were not empty ,
makes them no less hollow

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or
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:D

that would be telling
..saying your words were not empty ,
makes them no less hollow

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Did we visit that same space LauraL?

As I hunted you down like a God!

I have found your hiding place
There! In the depths of my soul,
I went wild
To my wilderness-
I went out hunting you
And by chance, you snared me!

I have found your hiding place,
There! in the depths of wildness,
Soul
You embraced me, there!

We flickering two
The stammering cavernous Us.

I have found your hiding place
And you devoured my all
As I sniffed you out

As I hunted you down like a God!


Matj
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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Did we visit that same space LauraL?
it appears that we did :D
..saying your words were not empty ,
makes them no less hollow

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Then in his Mercy
may he give us a safe l,odging,
And a Holy rest,
And peace at Last.

John Henry Newman;Wisdom and Innocence
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