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Fuck....

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What a lousy piece of shit... Why I say ... I just say Why....
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Was this poem, destined for greatness, written by someone who can be named, Muddy?
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no, Liz, I was complaining about that jerk who put advertisments all along this section.
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Ahhhh.......okay. Jarkko does a very good job of getting those eliminated, as soon as he's able. YES! They are aggravating!

~ Lizzy
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Post by muddy »

Now it could be a poem.... :D



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What

a lousy


piece of shit


Why? - I say-


I just say
why.
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There ya go ~

and now it just needs to be submitted in the Member's Poetry Section :wink: .

~ Lizzy
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hahahaha!!!


we were discussing Bukowski, weren't we? It could one of his poems...
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we were discussing Bukowski, weren't we? It could one of his poems...
... and that was what was in my mind when I originally asked... somehow it didn't get included in my rushing to answer and get back to work... and, no, I'm not making that up :) . It's the reason why I thought it had to be someone's poem, most likely his, as though you posted it knowing people would know its source. Alas, alack, I Submitted without remembering to include that.

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well, I'm going to post another swearing poem because the jerk is back...


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Hey
You
Jerk

Get
Out
Of
Here.

understood?
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I'm glad Jarkko is doing its job....Go, Jarkko!
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I concur with your frustration and with Jarkko's excellence!
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They fuck you up, your mum and dad.
They may not mean to, but they do.
They fill you with the faults they had
And add some extra, just for you.

But they were fucked up in their turn
By fools in old style hats and coats,
Who half the time were soppy-stern
And half at one another's throats.

Man hands on misery to man.
It deepens like a coastal shelf.
Get out as early as you can,
And don't have any kids yourself.

April ? 1971. Philip Larkin. (1922 - 1985)


I sometimes wish my parents hadn't had any kids.............
"Bipolar is a roller-coaster ride without a seat belt. One day you're flying with the fireworks; for the next month you're being scraped off the trolley" I said that.
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