Monster beast

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James the miller
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Monster beast

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So, here I go again, putting something in front of you...

(you can hear it spoken here - https://soundcloud.com/james-the-miller )

It came upon me suddenly, my armour lying aside
It had come tooled up and ready, from a beguilingly gentle tide
A huge black, red-eyed, claw-footed, bastard monster beast
It sunk its shovel into my body, at the point of resistance least

In one fell scoop out came my heart, my soul and my gut
It filled the gaping hole with dead wet peat freshly cut
It lofted my vitals through the air, into the waiting mire
Then stitched up the wound with an old harpoon and a length of rusty barbed wire

It left me lying gasping, ready to a die
But I didn't, I wouldn't, I will not, readily comply
I'm still here, I'm still alive, if for now in a certain fashion
Dragonflies only have one life, I intend to live it with a passion.
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Carolyn M Kleefeld
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Re: Monster beast

Post by Carolyn M Kleefeld »

Wow, this is a really powerful poem. Very vivid imagery, thought-provoking, and skillfully written. ~Carolyn
"We are all forces and instruments of Nature, expressing her every whisper and scream, in an ever-evolving symphony of creation." --Carolyn Mary Kleefeld
You can see more of my art and poetry on my Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/carolyn.kleefeld?fref=ts
Cate
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Re: Monster beast

Post by Cate »

This is definitely a case of poetry that should be heard!

Your reading is excellent and conjured some wonderful dark and sinister images for me.
James the miller
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Thank you Carolyn and Cate...very kind of you. Sorry for taking so long to say so.
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