Serena’s Story
Laughter chimes
Fate entwines
Two wandering souls
Sailing blind
I dreamt of you
Now we’re talking
Laughing and smiling
I’m struck dumb gawping
A Bologna bar
Launches my zeal
At 3am
Bow stern and keel
5 days pass
Shall we marry?
Unfurl the sail
Two children to carry
Serena's story -finished at last!
Serena's story -finished at last!
Last edited by democracy on Sun Jun 06, 2010 5:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Serena's story
I like this Democracy
When you spend time thinking of someone, and suddenly (so it seems) there you are, and there they are - right infront of you.
I like the ship theme, and I especially like your use of words in conjunction with this at the end.
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When you spend time thinking of someone, and suddenly (so it seems) there you are, and there they are - right infront of you.
I like the ship theme, and I especially like your use of words in conjunction with this at the end.
A
x
Weybridge MBW 11th July 2009
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank
'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe
Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...