When The Season Ends

Joe Kaczmarek · Post by **Joe Kaczmarek** » Sat Jul 19, 2003 10:35 pm

When daisies sweat,
dandelions bleed.

Dropped clues and names
and little leads.

All your sweaty beads
and beds for games.
Just words on some flame's
nude screen.

Make dandies bleed
a crying stream
of bloody green.

magneticcry · Post by **magneticcry** » Fri Jul 25, 2003 11:00 pm

the poem as a whole is good,but i think i don`t understand the meaning as a whole.....

Joe Kaczmarek · Post by **Joe Kaczmarek** » Mon Jul 28, 2003 12:53 am

Dear Magneticry,

Distance, jealousy, possessiveness, spying

Not necessarily in that order.