To love Someone

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To love Someone

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To love someone
Whos gone from you
Theres no way back
And their love was true

he lost his mind
It wasnt you,
He had the crack
Your feelings flew,

The women loved
The hyper man
He wasnt mad
But never dalmed

He drank a pint
from dawn till morn
was never drunk
and played the horn

I see it all
now looking back
The reckless fall
to maniac...
love is not forgotten......
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Jimbo,

I guess you are the man in your poem. Losin' your girl is a shitful thing. Sometimes writing to an audience
is the only way you can alleviate the pain. Maybe your audience gets sick of ya', maybe not.
You still love her? Go for it mate. What have you got to lose except a sorry dependence on what
other people think. What can it hurt? Call her mate.

In peace,
Adam :)
'In the depth of winter, I finally learned that within me there lay an invincible summer' - Albert Camus
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thanks boss/have you got a direct line to Heaven......??
love is not forgotten......
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I'm sorry Jimbo, I don't.
I am sorry

Good Christmas, hey

Boss
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no problem Adam.were still on the same side( pax tecum)
love is not forgotten......
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thanks boss/have you got a direct line to Heaven......??
I did have, but the "combine" disconnected me.
That's life.
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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thats the beauty of it

you can reconnect dude
love is not forgotten......
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Hi Jimbo ,

Losing someone you love is so painful , for me words fail.
My husband died suddenly and for years it's too been too raw to even grieve.
That empty aching void , a loss of something as simple as warm breath on your shoulder , being held as you drift into sleep.





In dreams

again

you are there ,

my loves gentle embrace.
..saying your words were not empty ,
makes them no less hollow

littlecrow feb/07
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I cant wait to die
when ill meet my mother
but i must wait my turn
and suffer a little longer
love is not forgotten......
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The genuineness and realness of your response to Jimbo moved me, Laura. I'm sorry to hear of your own deep and raw loss. I hope your own poignant poem brings you comfort as much as it gives tribute to your love.

Thank you for sharing this with us.


~ Lizzy
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Dear Jimbo ~

I see that your mother's loss is still very painful for you. When they say it takes time, they mean it, don't they.


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Im ok with with it now
I only have good memories
of her hugs and kisses
and tucking me into bed

thank you Liz and Laural
love is not forgotten......
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