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see/unsaw

Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:39 pm
by elazar
these chains which coil
gasping for a fix
worn down endless toil
forever torn between picks

statue cast featureless block
and crumble to dust
lapping murky mysteries mock
and glitter with lust

reclaim laughter candor lightness
uncape cruel forboding knot
step unsown dancing sightless
maintain they rain ignored

Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 7:44 pm
by seamus
nice words continue........... :lol: :lol:

Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:51 am
by elazar
thanks! i hope more shall come...