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Atheist Love Song
Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:03 am
by Murray Hill
According to Rene Descartes
where our bodies end our minds start
But he knew best as a man of the chart
that lines both connect and set apart
Like lovers linked at hand and heart
mind and body must never part
Like the artist and the art
body and mind must never part
Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 2:52 pm
by Tri-me
As a massage therapist and Buddhist I think this is poetry in motion.
Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 5:05 pm
by lizzytysh
As a non-massage therapist and a non-Buddhist, I also think this is poetry in motion. I love the conceptual visuals and the truth. I also feel it need not necessarily be Atheist. Beautiful.
~ Lizzy
Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:47 pm
by Murray Hill
Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Tri-Me and Lizzy. I agree that it need not necessarily be Atheist, and in fact, I do not consider myself Atheist (which after all, is another kind of religion, is it not?) I suspect the poem may have given that away, despite itself.
Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:52 pm
by lizzytysh
Hi Murray ~
I presumed that the atheism was attributed to Descartes but not necessarily you. However, just in case.......offered my sentiments on the poem itself.
~ Lizzy