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haiku

Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2019 7:48 am
by tom.d.stiller
i've lost too many
sue andrew babz and now jo
spring buds only tears

Re: haiku

Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2019 2:19 pm
by LauriefromAlaska
We are a future
Memory like those cherished
Friends whose light still shines.

Re: high-queue

Posted: Fri Apr 12, 2019 6:47 pm
by solongleonard
hopeless failed attempt

Bye – a bad net loss

Basket ball game and

A high queue awaits to score


sorry, I had never written a Haiku before and I now realise I wrote a 5.57. and not a 5.7.5

I will try again over the weekend. I shamed the forum

Re: haiku

Posted: Tue Apr 16, 2019 7:42 am
by tom.d.stiller
HiQ misses worlds.
future is beyond this spring.
scores never mattered.

of course scores matter

Posted: Wed May 08, 2019 12:48 am
by solongleonard
tom.d.stiller wrote: Tue Apr 16, 2019 7:42 am HiQ misses worlds.
future is beyond this spring.
scores never mattered.
respect the twenties
surely their parents loved them
hiq up and calm down