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My obscene girl

Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 3:38 pm
by Monday
This is for her my obscene girl
the one who googled me for reason
the way she showed me mortal flesh
was of interest for just one season

I am not as graduated as she thought I am
the moon has never been my sister
I broke a bone and deleted spam
my payroll does no longer list her

Sometimes in desperate hours
history slaps and hits me hard
but then again I smile and ponder
each prison needs to have its yard

I take no blame in all respect
I'm just a boy in a queue of guys
we are for good under suspect
but hey that is what life supplies

This poem is a bitter pill
for those in search of revelation
it covers more than it reveals
it's neither stop nor station

A life flows by and cannot halt
it's logged in books and letters
to grab a piece of this and that
is really all that matters

Re: My obscene girl

Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 1:04 pm
by Flynote
Love ;-)

Re: My obscene girl

Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 12:51 am
by Geoffrey
Monday wrote:
>. . . and cannot halt it's logged in books

Flynote reacted:
>Very good English on top of Congrads...


yeh Reel good - ha ha!!

Re: My obscene girl

Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 11:36 am
by Monday
Thnx girls for pointing at this. I didn't mean to say "locked" but isn't it ok to say "logged" like they had this log book on the enterprise where Captain Kirk wrote his daily report ? If you say I better change it to "locked" I am free to do so. Let's keep this open source and change things on your demand. For you ... I will be the Java Jew.

Re: My obscene girl

Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 12:36 pm
by lizzytysh
I like it, Monday.


~ Lizzy