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Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 8:41 am
by imaginary friend
six, seven, eight, nine
- for sensuality, this
thread is a 10-plus
(second only to Colonial Suicide, of course... or as the BBC says 'seeeyewicide'.)
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 12:45 pm
by tinderella
thread is a ten plus
but still it's thinner than wool
I can't knit with it
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 1:59 pm
by Geoffrey
tinderella wrote:thread is a ten plus
but still it's thinner than wool
I can't knit with it
I can't knit with it
'scratched', 'screeched', 'scrounged', 'scrunched', 'strengths', 'stretched', 'straights'
all words that don't fit
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 3:46 pm
by tinderella
all words that dont fit
but make my teeth feel on edge
when I recite them
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 4:39 pm
by Harry S
tinderella wrote:all words that dont fit
but make my teeth feel on edge
when I recite them
when I recite them
excite them and incite them
your breasts, can I bite them?
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 4:56 pm
by tinderella
extra syllable in that last line harry
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 5:06 pm
by tinderella
will try again
when i recite them
the words of Leonard Cohen
'I breathe the fragrance'
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 5:06 pm
by Harry S
tinderella wrote:extra syllable in that last line harry
sorry, I got too carried away biting your breasts.
when I recite them
I fall into a deep sleep
your lines so boring
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 5:08 pm
by Harry S
tinderella wrote:will try again
when i recite them
the words of Leonard Cohen
'I breathe the fragrance'
I breathe the fragrance
of last night's beer on your breath
brush your teeth, woman
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 2:28 am
by Alexandra Scarlet
Enjoyed your Barter's Hill haiku, MyMichelle. I'll be watching for more
Brush your teeth woman
orders the brash commander
she does not obey
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 3:15 am
by MyMichelle
Thanks Scarlett for your comments
she does not obey
and whoever said she should
is full of dog crap
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 11:20 am
by anneporter
is full of dog crap
the garden when the snow goes
new blades of iris
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 11:45 am
by anneporter
new blades of iris
sunlight illuminating
pure green clarity
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 12:51 pm
by Harry S
anneporter wrote:new blades of iris
sunlight illuminating
pure green clarity
pure green clarity
lost to bipolarity
mood extremity
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 3:12 pm
by lizzytysh
mood extremity
metal arm and hinged fingers
touching grief of war