The Infinite Haiku

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... thanks Anne!

... hmm.. I'm feeling a bit lower than dirt at the moment...
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anneporter wrote:compassion revealed
in a lady's acceptance
silk purse from sow's ear
silk purse from sow's ear
beside the heaps of garbage
blue flag irises!
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blue flag irises!
wildflowers out of control
report for duty!
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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report to duty!
ire raised by bureaucracy,
I sit and peel my orange...
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I sit and peel my orange...
its skin a spiral falling
nectar on my lips
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nectar on my lips
peaches ripened in orchards
colour of your cheeks
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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sorry --just read the last 2 haiku and realized I didn't count my syllables last time. My apologies to any syllable purists out there... i won't edit because Violet and Lizzy have followed on with their lovely verses, but it can be read as "I peel my orange."

[note to self: no more hasty posts]
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colour of your cheeks
strawberries still in the field
your blushing sweetness
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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your blushing sweetness
yes... lift your skirt for crossing
the stream without bridge
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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stream without a bridge
water bugs climb muddy reeds
crane dangles steel beam
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crane dangles steel beam
backlit by the rising sun
St. John's waterfront
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crane dangles steel beam
walking stick against grey sky
man dwarfing nature


[We'll go with yours, Anne... after finally getting what I wanted with it, I couldn't bear to just let it go ;-) .]
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St. John's waterfront
covered by ocean debris
hurricane now gone
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hurricane now gone
leaving an art deco sky
cream/lilac/ pink/ blue
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cream/lilac/ pink/ blue
Colours of the haiku girls
Lads lag way behind
Most of the people who want to live forever don't know what to do
with themselves on a wet sunday afternoon ...........
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