The Infinite Haiku
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... thanks Anne!
... hmm.. I'm feeling a bit lower than dirt at the moment...
... hmm.. I'm feeling a bit lower than dirt at the moment...
Violet
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silk purse from sow's earanneporter wrote:compassion revealed
in a lady's acceptance
silk purse from sow's ear
beside the heaps of garbage
blue flag irises!
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blue flag irises!
wildflowers out of control
report for duty!
wildflowers out of control
report for duty!
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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report to duty!
ire raised by bureaucracy,
I sit and peel my orange...
ire raised by bureaucracy,
I sit and peel my orange...
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I sit and peel my orange...
its skin a spiral falling
nectar on my lips
its skin a spiral falling
nectar on my lips
Violet
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nectar on my lips
peaches ripened in orchards
colour of your cheeks
peaches ripened in orchards
colour of your cheeks
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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sorry --just read the last 2 haiku and realized I didn't count my syllables last time. My apologies to any syllable purists out there... i won't edit because Violet and Lizzy have followed on with their lovely verses, but it can be read as "I peel my orange."
[note to self: no more hasty posts]
[note to self: no more hasty posts]
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colour of your cheeks
strawberries still in the field
your blushing sweetness
strawberries still in the field
your blushing sweetness
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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your blushing sweetness
yes... lift your skirt for crossing
the stream without bridge
yes... lift your skirt for crossing
the stream without bridge
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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stream without a bridge
water bugs climb muddy reeds
crane dangles steel beam
water bugs climb muddy reeds
crane dangles steel beam
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crane dangles steel beam
backlit by the rising sun
St. John's waterfront
backlit by the rising sun
St. John's waterfront
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crane dangles steel beam
walking stick against grey sky
man dwarfing nature
[We'll go with yours, Anne... after finally getting what I wanted with it, I couldn't bear to just let it go
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walking stick against grey sky
man dwarfing nature
[We'll go with yours, Anne... after finally getting what I wanted with it, I couldn't bear to just let it go

"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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St. John's waterfront
covered by ocean debris
hurricane now gone
covered by ocean debris
hurricane now gone
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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hurricane now gone
leaving an art deco sky
cream/lilac/ pink/ blue
leaving an art deco sky
cream/lilac/ pink/ blue
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cream/lilac/ pink/ blue
Colours of the haiku girls
Lads lag way behind
Colours of the haiku girls
Lads lag way behind
Most of the people who want to live forever don't know what to do
with themselves on a wet sunday afternoon ...........
with themselves on a wet sunday afternoon ...........