The Infinite Haiku

[Marisha]

so drink your blood now
'tis but the dawn that baits us
let's fly to great heights

let's fly to great heights
deep here do we dwell, so it
would make a nice change

[lizzytysh]

would make a nice change
try on the words of others
compassion revealed

[Violet]

would make a nice change
if you'd just cut me some slack
not always a hack

[Marisha]

would make a nice change
if you'd just cut me some slack
not always a hack

not always a hack
can be just cutting instead
removing dead hearts

[Violet]

removing dead hearts
at least they are bloody dead
cutting tongue instead

[lizzytysh]

OHhhh... I like mine better [or at least where it could end up], posted just one minute before yours, Violet:

would make a nice change
try on the words of others
compassion revealed

[Marisha]

removing dead hearts
at least they are bloody dead
cutting tongue instead

cutting tongue instead
drew blood whilst I gave you head
was just a small prick

[Violet]

was just a small prick?
your tomb suggests otherwise
don't ruin my fun

[Marisha]

was just a small prick?
your tomb suggests otherwise
don't ruin my fun

don't ruin my fun
damental spiritual
belief in nothing

[Violet]

belief in nothing
that's too easy councilor
give another try

[Marisha]

belief in nothing
that's too easy councilor
give another try

give another try
no, I choose not to do so
goodbye for ever

[Violet]

goodbye forever
seems a long long time, my lord
as long as that tomb...

[anneporter]

would make a nice change
try on the words of others
compassion revealed

getting back to the original sequence:

compassion revealed
in a lady's acceptance
silk purse from sow's ear

[Violet]

... oh, sorry Lizzy... I totally missed that I'd missed your post... wasn't sure what you were talking about.. then, well, his lordship picked up... anyway, apologies to all for my part in this multi-syllabic travesty...

v i o l e t

[lizzytysh]

No problem, Violet. I knew you didn't see it, as I also knew which one you'd have gone with, had you realized there was a choice.

As always, Anne carried it to the higher road.


~ Lizzy