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Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 7:22 pm
by Gullivor
collect some for home
pebbles placed in my pockets
my pants have fell down
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:54 pm
by Sideways
Gullivor wrote:collect some for home
pebbles placed in my pockets
my pants have fell down
my pants have fell down
and now they must be ironed
my balls have fell down
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:29 pm
by anneporter
my balls have fell down
face sags as arches collapse:
a vintage human
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 1:30 pm
by anneporter
a vintage human
free from the moon's tidal sway
blurring, softening...
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 6:43 pm
by piñata heart
blurring, softening...
i wish i could remember
kissing you that night
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:08 pm
by Violet
kissing you that night
well do I remember it
deep here do I dwell...
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:18 pm
by Marisha
Violet wrote:kissing you that night
well do I remember it
deep here do I dwell...
"deep here do I dwell"
language here do you mangle
so not are you well?
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:33 pm
by Violet
... it hasn't occurred to me yet that that's such a bad line, but I'll take your word for it (!)... carry on... (someone more inspired I hope than I am at the moment)... v.
... oh god... it's now occurring to me just how crappy that line is...
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 10:53 pm
by Marisha
Violet wrote:kissing you that night
well do I remember it
deep here do I dwell...
deep here do I dwell
you know sex with you is hell,
oooh, just watch it swell
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 11:11 pm
by tinderella
oooh just watch it swell
your head, from all my nice words
I better be mean
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 11:19 pm
by Marisha
tinderella wrote:oooh just watch it swell
your head, from all my nice words
I better be mean
I better be mean
and you had better be you
down on your knees, Girl
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 1:24 pm
by anneporter
down on your knees, Girl
don't matter how you worship
the dawn-lit delta
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 6:07 pm
by tinderella
the dawn-lit delta
brings us to the omega
the night closes in
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:22 pm
by Marisha
tinderella wrote:the dawn-lit delta
brings us to the omega
the night closes in
the night closes in
only a few minutes time
so drink your blood now
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:30 pm
by Violet
so drink your blood now
'tis but the dawn that baits us
let's fly to great heights