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Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 7:40 pm
by Manna
feeding on small sins
his knees upon the pillow
she threw down for him
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 9:43 pm
by Harry S
she threw down for him
but then she threw up for him
password theft's real crime
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 9:44 pm
by Harry S
password theft's real crime
Jack the collaborator
must also be shot
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 9:51 pm
by Violet
Harry S wrote:she threw down for him
then she threw up for him [this line really made me laugh] [just thought I'd mention it].. [continue all]..
password theft's real crime
edit: thought a smaller font would be easier on the eyes... also, as per Tinderella's remark below... Harry, you got counting troubles... v.
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 10:15 pm
by lizzytysh
must also be shot
beneath the sea as above
photographer's dream
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:08 pm
by tinderella
Harry's lines are amusing but he seems to have trouble counting the syllables
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:12 pm
by tinderella
Photographer's dream
to be there at the moment
when the bud opens
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:14 pm
by Violet
tinderella wrote:Harry's lines are amusing but he seems to have trouble counting the syllables
... good point!
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:26 pm
by Harry S
when the bud opens
we drink so much that we think
we are bud wiser
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:48 pm
by Violet
we are bud wiser
this heat before the lily
open now this heart
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:54 pm
by tinderella
open now this heart
true happiness lies within
let me feel the love
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:57 pm
by imaginary friend
Let me feel the love
But don't forget to show me
The money also
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 12:03 am
by Harry S
imaginary friend wrote:Let me feel the love
But don't forget to show me
The money also
the money also
fell to the floor, with my pants,
now stripped for action
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 12:11 am
by imaginary friend
now stripped for action,
I say unto you Harry:
No money? No love.
Re: The Infinite Haiku
Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 12:55 am
by imaginary friend
No money? No love?
Well then, what about humour?
Anyone out there?