Haiku Corner.

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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Karren B » Fri Jun 24, 2016 9:35 pm

Geoffrey wrote
be careful, karren. there are quite a few deviants in here, and you could be giving them ideas.
I am shocked to hear this G! :shock: Can't believe such people could be found here in the back room of the forum.
Geoffrey wrote:boss' contribution was disqualified due to failure to adhere to the strict '5-7-5 syllable' rule.
And there's me thinking I was the only one here to demand complete compliance. ;-)
LisaLCFan wrote:He pulled up the zip
Of the dusty garment bag
Revealing the dress.

(artistic licence employed: changed "and" to "he". If you can skip someone's poem, I can change a word!)
Revealing the dress,
a lone thought escaped his eye
and rolled down his cheek
'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

'Loving you is the most exquisite form of self destruction'...
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Geoffrey » Sat Jun 25, 2016 12:54 pm

Karren B wrote: Revealing the dress,
a lone thought escaped his eye
and rolled down his cheek
and rolled down his cheek
as he cut off his two legs
and then shot himself
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby LisaLCFan » Sat Jun 25, 2016 11:17 pm

And then shot himself.
With a sharp gasp, he awoke.
It was just a dream.
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Karren B » Mon Jun 27, 2016 3:05 pm

LisaLCFan wrote:And then shot himself.
With a sharp gasp, he awoke.
It was just a dream.
It was just a dream;
a beautiful, painless dream
till it was over.
'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

'Loving you is the most exquisite form of self destruction'...
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby LisaLCFan » Wed Jun 29, 2016 7:12 am

Till it was over,
Silent they remained. And then,
Applause like thunder.
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Geoffrey » Thu Jun 30, 2016 12:02 pm

LisaLCFan wrote:Till it was over,
Silent they remained. And then,
Applause like thunder.
Applause like thunder.
then a big meteorite
smashed the earth to bits.
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby LisaLCFan » Thu Jun 30, 2016 7:18 pm

Geoffrey wrote:Applause like thunder.
then a big meteorite
smashed the earth to bits.
Smashed the earth to bits,
To save the universe from
Geoffrey's dismal verse.
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Karren B » Mon Jul 04, 2016 11:57 am

LisaLCFan wrote
Smashed the earth to bits,
To save the universe from
Geoffrey's dismal verse
Geoffrey's dismal verse
portrays his haiku hatred,
but still makes me smile. :)
'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

'Loving you is the most exquisite form of self destruction'...
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby jimbo » Tue Nov 01, 2016 4:47 pm

well i
am back
my haiku skills intack
lets just
p onder
love is not forgotten......
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby jimbo » Tue Nov 01, 2016 4:53 pm

dawn is breaking now
birds singng on the wing
sun smouldering low
love is not forgotten......

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