Haiku Corner.

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Geoffrey
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Geoffrey » Sat Apr 16, 2016 12:08 am

LisaLCFan wrote:That is really lovely. Have you ever considered writing greeting cards? Who wouldn't want to receive a card so full of such poetic charm?
do i detect veiled sarcasm here? do you not recognise when a stick is being pushed into the spokes of a wheel, lisa? you will agree that haiku is the most banal form of poetry; i was merely trying to lead the cattle over the nearest cliff.
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Gullivor » Sat Apr 16, 2016 2:33 pm

doused in gasoline
i was placed to burn alive
toes were left unharmed
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Karren B » Sat Apr 16, 2016 3:51 pm

Toes were left unharmed
Still following the same path
Spirit flying free
'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

'Loving you is the most exquisite form of self destruction'...
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Geoffrey » Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:20 am

Karren B wrote:Toes were left unharmed
Still following the same path
Spirit flying free
spirit flying free
like ejaculated sperm
from a lonely prick
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Karren B » Mon Apr 18, 2016 2:34 pm

From a lonely prick
Sleeping beauty’s fate was sealed,
Hope her prince comes soon
'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

'Loving you is the most exquisite form of self destruction'...
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Gullivor » Wed Jun 01, 2016 3:46 pm

Hope her prince comes soon
Dashing through the countryside
He tripped on a rock
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Karren B » Wed Jun 01, 2016 5:41 pm

He tripped on a rock
But should have stuck to ganja;
Bad journey ahead
'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

'Loving you is the most exquisite form of self destruction'...
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Boss » Fri Jun 03, 2016 2:26 am

Bad journey ahead
"Andromeda" Bub said
She took him so deep like a song
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Geoffrey » Fri Jun 03, 2016 7:58 pm

Karren B wrote:He tripped on a rock
But should have stuck to ganja;
Bad journey ahead
bad journey ahead
he thought, as he shot his load
high into the air
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Karren B » Fri Jun 03, 2016 9:54 pm

Nice to see you G. :D

High into the air
With neither aim or conscience,
Hot lava sprang forth
'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

'Loving you is the most exquisite form of self destruction'...
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Geoffrey » Sat Jun 04, 2016 12:30 am

Karren B wrote:Nice to see you G. :D

High into the air
With neither aim or conscience,
Hot lava sprang forth
nice to see you as well, karren.

hot lava sprang forth
landing down on his trousers
and he felt better
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Karren B » Sat Jun 04, 2016 1:44 pm

Geoffrey wrote:
Karren B wrote:Nice to see you G. :D

High into the air
With neither aim or conscience,
Hot lava sprang forth
nice to see you as well, karren.

hot lava sprang forth
landing down on his trousers
and he felt better
Not sure if anyone would feel better with hot lava down their trousers, :shock: (I suggest you try nothing hotter than candle wax). ;-)


And he felt better
Now; undone, untied, released
Exhausted and spent
'Being ‘normal’ is not necessarily a virtue; it rather denotes a lack of courage!'

'Loving you is the most exquisite form of self destruction'...
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Geoffrey » Sat Jun 04, 2016 5:38 pm

Karren B wrote:
>Not sure if anyone would feel better with hot lava down their trousers. (I suggest you try nothing hotter than candle wax)

be careful, karren. there are quite a few deviants in here, and you could be giving them ideas.

>And he felt better
>Now; undone, untied, released
>Exhausted and spent

exhausted and spent
he put his pet snake to bed
and pulled up the zip
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby LisaLCFan » Mon Jun 06, 2016 12:00 am

He pulled up the zip
Of the dusty garment bag
Revealing the dress.


(artistic licence employed: changed "and" to "he". If you can skip someone's poem, I can change a word!)
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Re: Haiku Corner.

Postby Geoffrey » Mon Jun 06, 2016 8:55 am

boss' contribution was disqualified due to failure to adhere to the strict '5-7-5 syllable' rule.

sent from my samsung mobile phone.

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