The Energy of Lovers

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The Energy of Lovers

Postby Mary72 » Sun Nov 05, 2017 7:56 pm

While everybody is enjoying their time in Montreal, here is something for the ones, like me, who remained in this side of the ocean/occasion. I hope you like my new poem. Many thanks for your time, Mary or Maria :-)

The Energy of Lovers

Imprisoned by your grace
I have declared myself
a slave of your love
Confined in invisible chains
I receive your presence
throught mysterious ways
In your face the holy place
of the blazing love
that I long to embrace
No broken promises
or concealed vows
will dissolve this strange enlace
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Re: The Energy of Lovers

Postby solongleonard » Mon Nov 06, 2017 11:24 pm

Undeterred by your single typo, very throughtful of you,
surviving that tiny poison potion,
I bought some visible chains,
an impressive anti-poetic notion,
as not everything is mysterious
and then I thanked you
for applying 9 lines, "nine for the nine bright shiners"
of resuscitation to this dead village
"10 for the Ten Commandments" xxx xxx xxx x

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