Susan takes me down

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Susan takes me down

Postby solongleonard » Tue Jan 03, 2017 2:01 am

Susan takes me down
but Leonard lifted me up
piled high with joy overflowing
I drank from his cup

A school girls crush
Back in the fifties
Never in a rush
he moved swiftly and nifty

He left us wanting more
Like an encore
Now Robert Kor
why did Len have to die?

He had so much to give
If only if if if!
destined to be married with a car and kids
but life ended and death arrived


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Re: Susan takes me down

Postby Geoffrey » Tue Jan 03, 2017 11:20 am

Wilhelmina wrote:Robert Kor
why did Len have to die?
what are you incinerating?
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Re: Susan takes me down

Postby solongleonard » Tue Jan 03, 2017 9:12 pm

"deep into his furry heart"
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Re: Susan takes me down

Postby Violet » Tue Jan 03, 2017 10:21 pm

Geoffrey wrote:
Wilhelmina wrote:Robert Kor
why did Len have to die?
what are you incinerating?
Geoffrey, you of course realize that this solong bird here is just another cunning tool of the power elite, intended to derail your mission. Keep your eyes on Dorothy's red shoes (that I happen to be wearing, although you can't see them in the photo), and don't be fooled.
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Re: Susan takes me down

Postby Geoffrey » Wed Jan 04, 2017 9:04 am

Violet wrote:
>Geoffrey, you of course realize that this solong bird here is just another cunning tool of the power elite, intended to derail your mission.

don't worry, dear violet. i am used to pieces of gravel jumping up onto my sandal. i know this gentleman, he sleeps in a cardboard box under eastbourne pier - not far from an internet cafe. very sad.
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Re: Susan takes me down

Postby solongleonard » Wed Jan 04, 2017 4:18 pm

As Sir Chris never tires of telling us, he was born in France. Accordingly, I find it curious that he writes cafe when he should, naturally, be writing café. If there are two things I detest it is Reverse Snobbery and Sir Chris's calculated insouciance are both of it.

May I add, as my old Mathematics Professor Lady Timothy Sprawlhugger used to jest, that although I have never visited the Rich Man's playground of Eastbourne, with which Sir Chris appears to be intimately familiar,I have heard it has no equal. It is pierless.
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Re: Susan takes me down

Postby Geoffrey » Wed Jan 04, 2017 4:40 pm

shouldn't you be down the council yard by now, collecting your road-sweeper cart?
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Re: Susan takes me down

Postby solongleonard » Wed Jan 04, 2017 5:51 pm

Geoffrey wrote:shouldn't you be down the council yard by now, collecting your road-sweeper cart?
That comment is both sexist and racist. It promotes a negative gender stereotype as well as slurring the reputation of an entire nation. Well Done, Sir Chris.
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Re: Susan takes me down

Postby solongleonard » Sun Jan 08, 2017 9:39 pm

I await Sir Chris's apology

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