How To Critique A Poem

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Johnny Goldsmith
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How To Critique A Poem

Post by Johnny Goldsmith » Wed Apr 22, 2015 9:46 pm

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Re: How To Critique A Poem

Post by mat james » Sun May 10, 2015 2:27 pm

...to Critique a Poem by Johnny Goldsmith
This is the list I use in my workshops COPY, PRINT & PASTE to your frig.
food
(for thought)
preserved
outside the "frig".
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Re: How To Critique A Poem

Post by Sideways » Sun May 10, 2015 6:25 pm

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yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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Re: How To Critique A Poem

Post by mat james » Mon May 11, 2015 1:41 am

Sideways S,
I thought my little juxtaposition of food types was an interesting one.
...and it was inspired by Johnny G.
So fair is fair.
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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Re: How To Critique A Poem

Post by Sideways » Mon May 11, 2015 12:38 pm

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yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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