Anonymous Posting poetry contest

This is for your own works!!!

what are Makeera, Rik and others scared of in posting a poem anonymously?

that without their name their friends won't be able automatically to praise it and it will be judged on its merits instead?
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that without their name their friends won't be able automatically to praise it and it will be judged on its merits instead?
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that without their name their friends won't be able automatically to praise it and it will be judged on its merits instead?
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Post by rick » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:14 am

Critic2, who will only leave if someone throws a stick, wrote:

"blah blah blah"

"blah"
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Post by Critic2 » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:19 am

rick- makera is here so you outnumber me 2-1 so you must be right about everything.. "you have never been deceased before" was excellent writing, "blue" and "the true" was a wonderful rhyme" , Leonard Cohen is 35, and Ralph Nader will win the election.

btw do you have a problem about masturbation? I have this image of you sniggering and then going red at the very thought?
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Post by rick » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:23 am

Critic2, who converses with zooplankton daily, wrote:

"blah blah blah"

"blah"
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Post by Critic2 » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:27 am

rick, vitriol gives a person the chance to really express himself. without the formal structure of some poetry you have all the freedom you want. but the kyjelly and handwarmer stuff, this zooplankton is dull DULL *DULL*. your assigned task in this forum is to entertain me.

so far, you have been poor in that one limited task.
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Post by rick » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:36 am

Critic2 (hard to believe that out of 10,000 sperm, he was the fastest) wrote:

"blah blah blah"

"blah"
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Post by Critic2 » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:40 am

oh no, the "sperm insult", circa. 1500. you are quite quite hopeless

rick, rick I thought you wouldn't enter the contest because you were sulking. but it really is your writing, isn't it.

anyway, girlfriend calling. goodnight.
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Post by rick » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:51 am

Critic2, who calls the girl at the 900 number his girlfriend, wrote:

"blah blah blah"

"blah"
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Post by Makera » Sat Oct 23, 2004 7:01 am

Oh, rick! That's priceless! :lol: :lol: :lol:

I'm reminded of a great quote,
"He who falls in love with himself will have no rivals."
~ Benjamin Franklin (1706-1790)

~ Makera
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Post by Critic2 » Sat Oct 23, 2004 10:31 am

Oh, rick! That's priceless!

I agree.





I see your

"He who falls in love with himself will have no rivals."
~ Makera

and raise you one "she who writes "the True" has no marbles"
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Post by Makera » Sat Oct 23, 2004 11:19 am

:roll: That is even more moronic than your usual.
You are a bit confused about what the 'game' is, aren't you?
You are actually in check with no pieces left....
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Post by Critic2 » Sat Oct 23, 2004 12:35 pm

Makera" That is even more moronic than your usual.
You are a bit confused about what the 'game' is, aren't you?
You are actually in check with no pieces left...


Baseball? American Football? Glide Hockey?
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Post by rick » Sat Oct 23, 2004 3:58 pm

Critic2, who will die in his own arms, wrote:

"blah blah blah"

"blah"
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Post by Critic2 » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:16 pm

rick- apparently you have woken up with the same degree of bitterness as you had when you went to sleep. what a shame.

I'm really sorry. If I could find a way, any way, not to laugh at your line "but you know, well, you've never been deceased " then I would grant you that indulgence. But it's quite impossible. Lines as bad as that come so rarely that they are, in a strange way, to be treasured. It's right up there with Makera's deleted poem and its desperate,forced rhyme of "blue" with "the true".

Meantime, your insults are quite hopeless. If semester hadn't finished already I would ask the kids to get me some much better playground insults for you to learn.

And but for your baby pride you could be joining in the contest fun.
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Post by rick » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:18 pm

Critic2, who has conjured up an entire family for himself, wrote:

"blah blah blah"

"blah"
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Post by Makera » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:35 pm

Hey rick, he really is as thick as a brick, isn't he! :roll:

Wishful thinking and fantasy rule his world... even to hallucinating that my poem was "deleted"! :lol:

~ Makera
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