Anonymous Posting poetry contest
rick- makera is here so you outnumber me 2-1 so you must be right about everything.. "you have never been deceased before" was excellent writing, "blue" and "the true" was a wonderful rhyme" , Leonard Cohen is 35, and Ralph Nader will win the election.
btw do you have a problem about masturbation? I have this image of you sniggering and then going red at the very thought?
btw do you have a problem about masturbation? I have this image of you sniggering and then going red at the very thought?
rick, vitriol gives a person the chance to really express himself. without the formal structure of some poetry you have all the freedom you want. but the kyjelly and handwarmer stuff, this zooplankton is dull DULL *DULL*. your assigned task in this forum is to entertain me.
so far, you have been poor in that one limited task.
so far, you have been poor in that one limited task.
rick- apparently you have woken up with the same degree of bitterness as you had when you went to sleep. what a shame.
I'm really sorry. If I could find a way, any way, not to laugh at your line "but you know, well, you've never been deceased " then I would grant you that indulgence. But it's quite impossible. Lines as bad as that come so rarely that they are, in a strange way, to be treasured. It's right up there with Makera's deleted poem and its desperate,forced rhyme of "blue" with "the true".
Meantime, your insults are quite hopeless. If semester hadn't finished already I would ask the kids to get me some much better playground insults for you to learn.
And but for your baby pride you could be joining in the contest fun.
I'm really sorry. If I could find a way, any way, not to laugh at your line "but you know, well, you've never been deceased " then I would grant you that indulgence. But it's quite impossible. Lines as bad as that come so rarely that they are, in a strange way, to be treasured. It's right up there with Makera's deleted poem and its desperate,forced rhyme of "blue" with "the true".
Meantime, your insults are quite hopeless. If semester hadn't finished already I would ask the kids to get me some much better playground insults for you to learn.
And but for your baby pride you could be joining in the contest fun.