Here's one of mine then.

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dar
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Here's one of mine then.

Post by dar » Sun Jun 27, 2004 6:03 pm

OK. No comments on Gordon's prose, so...here's one of Dar's. You can comment on mine if you want. I'm almost normal but I always felt Gordon is better with words, because he's closer to crazy. ha!

Dry Claim

Ultimately, nothing
diamonds my mine,
I think a dry claim
and I dig it.
It's the deed
that's got me
down here hidden
in the rubble
desperate for gold.
I lie despairing
for nothing
Down here fools
turn to dust
Then settle
back to bone
and rust.

Dar wrote this before "Diamonds in the Mine" came out, so there.
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