could I have your kiss forever?

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peter danielsen
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could I have your kiss forever?

Post by peter danielsen » Sun Jun 06, 2004 11:28 pm

Could I have your kiss forever
Im laying down my hand
Im halfway through the struggle
but lost in desertland

The fires on my eyelids
has turned against my brain
the joy has swiftly died out
to realize the pain

I hear you talking to me
I sense a soothing voice
you cannot reach the broken
he's left without a choice

I have to leave it's over
I know I lost the game
my brain is slowly fading
my heart is not to blame

I hope you see me smiling
between the truths and lies
and in your kiss forever
salvation never dies
Daniel Petersen
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Post by Daniel Petersen » Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:09 pm

yes you could peter, but lips only, tongue no, lips yes

daniel
I say love it is a flower, and a flower really stinks
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Post by G.M. » Tue Jun 08, 2004 3:45 pm

Please take this as a "friendly" warning. The reply to Mr Danielsen was perhaps inappropriate. I will not take offical action at this stage but do exercise restraint in the future.

Thank you.
Daniel Petersen
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Post by Daniel Petersen » Tue Jun 08, 2004 4:22 pm

give me a kiss to build a dream on
and my imagination will feed upon that kiss
ohh sweetheart I ask no more than this
A kiss to build a dream on
I say love it is a flower, and a flower really stinks
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Post by lizzytysh » Sat Jul 03, 2004 6:31 pm

Hi Peter ~ I really like the way you've brought together the kiss, the hand, the eyelids, the brain, the voice, and the heart....."and in your kiss forever / salvation never dies." Very nice.

~ Lizzy
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