A SNIPER'S VISION

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lightasabreeze
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A SNIPER'S VISION

Post by lightasabreeze » Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:44 pm

A SNIPER'S VISION

He knows how to pull the trigger
He's happy to stay on his own
He knows how to cut the frigger
who just won't leave him alone.
But he finds that corpses of children
play hell with his shooting vision.
Somebody must have died for you
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Re: A SNIPER'S VISION

Post by GinaDCG » Sun Feb 28, 2010 2:13 pm

I like this. Tight, controlled and with a nice wallop at the end.
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