It was okay/nice - I prefer your 50 sec. poems.mickey_one wrote:We corresponded for years
I was looking forward to meeting her in real life
I was warned she would be an enormous disappointment
she turned out to be very nice
imagine my disappointment
confess, did you like that?
I liked your after discussion better.
I did like the twist, I also liked the vagueness of what N's disappointment might be.why?
It’s like one of those pictures with just dots in it. You see a mother nursing a baby and your spouse sees a stripper and a pole, so you both squint harder trying to figure out who’s right, then one of you notices the title ‘Salvation’ and in each of your minds you have been proven correct – okay it’s not really like that, but it does leave many possibilities. Is he disappointed because she’s nice and N was hoping for naughty? Was N was hoping for a reason not to like her? Why?…
? okay I hope this is an example of, "Ooh, I don't really understand that but I bet it's ironic" ?The example I gave from 1000 Kisses is not particularly helpful as that song's strength is surely in the wonderful moody atmosphere of the song.