A lazy day in Eden

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A lazy day in Eden

Post by mat james » Sat Mar 27, 2021 2:46 pm

A lazy day in Eden
("before were was, I am")

...there were two trees
in that mind of Eden
one ploughed, you are mortal !
while the other seeded, you are eternal

and I photosynthesized
i am
i am



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Re: A lazy day in Eden

Post by mat james » Mon Mar 29, 2021 1:41 am

...this one's for Judy.

A lazy day in Eden
(A 3 word summary of old and new)

there were 2 Trees in the garden of Eden
one Tree shouted
I am mortal !
the other Tree whispered
I am eternal

and I echoed
...I am?



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Re: A lazy day in Eden

Post by Judy » Mon Mar 29, 2021 10:12 am

Thank you Mat :)
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A cheesy day in Edam

Post by solongleonard » Tue Mar 30, 2021 12:26 am

mat james wrote:
Mon Mar 29, 2021 1:41 am
...this one's for Judy.

A lazy day in Eden
(A 3 word summary of old and new)

there were 2 Trees in the garden of Eden
one Tree shouted
I am mortal !
the other Tree whispered
I am eternal

and I echoed
...I am?



MatbbgJ

When Mat visits Edam, semi-hard, red paraffin wax, his love for Judy, relax, he gives her his red coat or rind, sometimes behind with affection, posters here on detection, this is a Big Roundabout from Walking Weekend Stalwart

there were 2 Threes in the Rule of Six
one Three shouted
I am chortle!
the other Three sniggered
I am Threetrunkle


and I Alexa-ed
...1 a.m.?

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Re: A lazy day in Eden

Post by mat james » Tue Mar 30, 2021 3:28 pm

Archangel M,

"...my heart in hiding
stirred for a bird"

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A lazy day in Sweden

Post by solongleonard » Sun Apr 04, 2021 2:50 pm

Noddy from Norway (https://burngoberrietvseries.fandom.com ... character))
artist from Aaslund
popped across the border
been on a late-night bender
cautioned to Sir Wrender
he took his pun and varnished.
I have cursed his name so often,
'cos he killed my wife and children
then he screwed my friends
And some of them I quite liked-
including an old woman on the helter-shelter,
who kept us hidden in the Garrick Club (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garrick_Club)
Then the solder ironing came
She died without a Wispa Bar (https://www.google.com/search?q=wispa+b ... dW2WptwL_M)
It was three in the morning (the beginning of April)
I'm the only one this evening
But I must go on
my front ears are my poison
Oh, the wind, my wind is blowing, (I do apologise)
Through the waves my wind is blowing (I think it's a reaction to the Wispa Bar)
no place like Holm (a village in the municipality of Bindal in Nordland county, Norway)
Wren goes into the nearest Swedish Convenience Store
asks for "a paintbrush, some spare dentures, and do you stockHolm?"
Boredom soon will come
Is Hank Marvin playing this week? (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hank_Marvin)
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Re: A lazy day in Eden

Post by mat james » Tue Apr 06, 2021 2:11 am

Thanks s’leonr’d for your jazz-a-dizzy response-therapy :idea:

being more vague than sharp
it took me awhile to untangle the ghost in your matter...

I appreciate your Buddha-response from that still point
awake amid the heedless
of a churning turning world.


below attempt at deciphering your post:
"...and so, solongleonard, I discern that...Noddy-ing off,
scratched and scraped by shards from this bard
you popped across the border of being
bee-buzzing on a late-night bender

…reflecting psuedo-pissedoffedly, cursing and cussing at and on Mat’s Mosaic-spartiate-reductionist meander
among the shade of 2 trees
...‘cause that lazy bastard MatbbgJ took his allegorical pun and vanished
And some of them I quite liked-!

but you, Mat, kept us hidden from purpose and meaning
so your poesy wilted, almost dying without a whisper

I'm the only one this evening bothering to untangle this
simpleton’s still point;
But I must go on...or must I.....? :roll:

Oh, my yhwh-wind is blowing through the waves; my eternal-wind is blowing through
your lazy Eden-shade-trees
to no place but

blind Boredom !!!

and yes! I too am almost asleep amid that writhing heedlessness,,,my bored & punch-drunk brain soon will over-come me…
so stop being so bloody cryptic, you antipoedean-dickwit
move on from your black-hole-oblique-offaling-about
or I will bother you no more with my
noddyingly-witty responses
............while you laze around in the Elane-shade...
of an eternally musing, burnning-bush;
wasn't it Sol who sang
"..oh ...for a burning bush !!! "?

kind regards,
solongleonard etc
(...sadly, I too was once a Solomony, Leonard-esque, neoplatonic, divine-maddened, traveling light- "flight of the alone to the Alone..." sortaguy...
but I too fell....I lost my way east of Eden...flaming swords and a forgotten, everlusting-Tree/bush; and all that god's-like-us-stufff...)"

No wonder then, solongleonard,
"A man needs a little madness
or he never dares cut the rope
and be free." (Kazantzakis' Zorba)


afterthought on The Two Of Us: by johnny k. eats.
"..and yet the sweet converse of an innocent mind
whose words are images
of thoughts refined
...is my soul's pleasure...and it sure must be the highest bliss of human kind when to thy haunts
(Oh solitude !)
2 kindred spirits and shaded saplings ........flee..."

Thanks for noddying in ...and on...Mike.

MatbbgJ
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Re: A lazy day in Eden

Post by mat james » Sat Apr 10, 2021 4:21 pm

What the serpent said to Eve
one idle day in Eden


Your little burning bush
pisses all over
that everlasting tree

you are the apple
of Adam's eye
or so it seems to me

eat this miss miss
eat this hiss hiss
...forget eternity!

she fell...
for it
and so did we



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