whose code was broken, cruzifix uncrossed...

say goodbye to alexandra leaving - then say goodbye to alexandra lost


This is just a magical song, I dont know why

Arno

thank you yoav, I'll try... my problem with closing time is that I love the lyrics but I somehow dont like the music that much... so I'll stick to the text. and to the not any of your business part: if I would want to keep it to myself I wouldnt post it here ;) thanks for your input, and take care A...

very nice indeed and funny

just what I needed right now...

I just wonder how you pronounce folk to make it rhyme with pulp
please dont take any offence there, just joking

take care

Arno

very nice yoav,
welcome

although I may add that translate is spelled with an s as far as I know
no offence, just a petite correction


take care
Arno

I'm afraid you misunderstood me completely liz, I meant this ONLY as self irony since I know that I sometimes write and write and noone really gets what I'm saying... In a way you have just given me another example for this fact ;) So long and now I'll make it perfectly clear without any room for (m...

I wont bore you with any more or less coherent ramblings and simply say:
I'm jealous... (I think this says it all )


very very beautiful

Arno

By the right, given to me by His Supreme Highness, meaning myself, I declare thee Harry Harpin legally divorced from this forum and all it's members. You are free to go and join any other forum you like. AMEN

Arno

Hi, my name is... ... aw dammit

hi ep, read it once and loved it... for a more detailed comment I need a little more time than I have right now... may take a while. As I posted in one of your previous poems this one too has this melodic quality to it that I really like... I'll post more thoughts later... til then, take care Arno

just wrote my first haiku
it's unbelievably crappy
posted this instead


Arno

PS: sorry, very drunk and I had to post something

(I dont even know what makes a three line text a haiku, can anyone tell me -- I'll read when sober )

liz, at least this thread gave you an excuse to show off ALL the different smileys that you have at your disposal :wink: lets see if I can do better: 8) :x :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :arrow: as to Harry, maybe he had a heart attack seeing all the kind answers to his post... Take care Arno

really great ep,

I enjoyed this melodic quality of your poem... it feels like a river carries you through the lines...

I really prefer your way of making an entrance

cheers arno

then, epurcelly, let me acknowledge that you didnt quite make "the entrance" and welcome you to this forum... I agree with you and must say (since I'm not that gracious as Lizzy) that I would have appreciated Harrys poem much more without the following speech. I hope you have a good time e...

Liz, you never cease to impress me


Harp, welcome btw

hi witty owl, I really liked your poem and your choice of topics doesnt "turn me off"... I started writing when I felt down and angry and therefore wrote practically only "bad-day" poems and songs but I'm sure that once I'll be feeling better I will produce happy stuff too... I j...