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by Teratogen
Sat Jul 03, 2010 11:37 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Day For Night
Replies: 22
Views: 2826

Re: Day For Night

Hahahaha :lol:

I'm being had.
by Teratogen
Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:39 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Day For Night
Replies: 22
Views: 2826

Re: Day For Night

Woah, that's a bit harsh. You don't really believe that, do you?
by Teratogen
Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:15 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Day For Night
Replies: 22
Views: 2826

Re: Day For Night

carm... I could never live with someone like you. I'd die an early death from orgasmic praise. Thank you. I can't say what for, but thank you. :) I envisioned--or rather heard--this song in my head a bit heavier (or rather a lot heavier) than this Waits song, but as for the voice... haha, yeah, that...
by Teratogen
Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:26 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Day For Night
Replies: 22
Views: 2826

Re: Day For Night

I was interested in a change of pace. I have not put it to music yet, except for in my head. The entire time I was writing it I wanted to keep meter and verse... y'know, keep a bit of the literary parts in there. Each line is 16 syllables. And I tried to keep with the day/night, dark/light, sun/moon...
by Teratogen
Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:19 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Immortal Declarations
Replies: 5
Views: 754

Re: Immortal Declarations

Thank you.
by Teratogen
Tue Jun 29, 2010 12:42 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Day For Night
Replies: 22
Views: 2826

Day For Night

Day For Night I took the day for a lover and all she gave me was the night I took the day for a lover but all she gave me was the night If I knew the end was darkness I’d never have turned on the light She wore a smile so bright that my faith became just a burned-out hole Yeah, she wore a smile so b...
by Teratogen
Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:50 pm
Forum: News
Topic: The Darkness - NEW SONG (work-in-progress) w/ LYRICS
Replies: 53
Views: 21494

Re: The Darkness - NEW SONG (work-in-progress) (Venice Aug 3rd)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KkWMqs67Lhw&feature=related Different version perhaps? Variation on lyrics, some words are difficult to make out: Caught the darkness, baby Drinking from your cup I caught the darkness, baby From your little ruby cup I said, ‘Is this contagious?’ You said, ‘Just drink ...
by Teratogen
Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:39 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Immortal Declarations
Replies: 5
Views: 754

Re: Immortal Declarations

Thank you, ladies. I've always had a hard time trying to be sensuous when writing. It mostly used to turn out like dialogue from porn. Dirty, and vivid, but too direct--a massive void of emotion. I spent a very long time working on this one, maybe getting down a quattrain a day. In the end I did a m...
by Teratogen
Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:43 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Immortal Declarations
Replies: 5
Views: 754

Immortal Declarations

Immortal Declarations When you turn from me it only confirms The truth of all that has been left unsaid; Caught on your glare my pride must come to terms With its unrav’ling like a spool of thread. In languor condemn’d the bed is your vase Whence the ground for wither’d petals equips Love to alienat...
by Teratogen
Fri Jun 11, 2010 12:41 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: In My Dreams...
Replies: 6
Views: 851

Re: In My Dreams...

In your dreams I see... a period. Period.
by Teratogen
Sat May 29, 2010 11:11 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The Muse
Replies: 5
Views: 659

Re: The Muse

Actually, I am curious. I had a foggy vision in my head during the writing of this. I wanted to verbalize that vision. Within the first few--I'd say the first four--stanzas, describe to me in detail what imagery you see in your own head when reading that part. And reading this over and over again my...
by Teratogen
Sat May 29, 2010 11:05 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The Muse
Replies: 5
Views: 659

Re: The Muse

The work is hard, but it is fun. I mostly enjoy the challenge of it. Keeping subjects and keeping structure are most difficult. But here is an insight to my method, no matter how odd it may sound: I see or hear or a word (written or spoken) and I think, "That's a great word! I want to use it!" And I...
by Teratogen
Fri May 28, 2010 12:59 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The Muse
Replies: 5
Views: 659

Re: The Muse

Too much to handle?
by Teratogen
Fri May 28, 2010 12:59 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The meaning of it all
Replies: 7
Views: 786

Re: The meaning of it all

Nobody should ever apologize for what they feel. Even if you are stepping on someone's toes (or thin ego ;-) ). You can't regret a feeling, it just doesn't make sense to do so.
by Teratogen
Thu May 27, 2010 9:47 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The meaning of it all
Replies: 7
Views: 786

Re: The meaning of it all

But I almost feel like it's not my place to tell you how to interpret what I wrote. As strange as that sounds, it makes me feel like I'm taking away something from you that doesn't even belong to me. I'm actually glad you were able to get something out of this. Perhaps that's just evidence of my ski...

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