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by Keizer
Sun Oct 20, 2013 8:30 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: I Tried To Leave You
Replies: 4
Views: 1949

Re: I Tried To Leave You

So Many Times

We tried to leave each other
The elastic's now worn slack
Sidle loosely back together
Back to back
by Keizer
Sun Sep 08, 2013 9:21 pm
Forum: THE SUMMER 2013 TOUR IN EUROPE
Topic: London 02 Arena question
Replies: 7
Views: 6342

Re: London 02 Arena question

I saw the Brighton concert recently and there were screens either side of the stage, even though the venue isn't huge.

I'm sure the best use will be made of whatever the 02 has to offer.
by Keizer
Fri Sep 06, 2013 1:19 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Clock Watchers In The Woods
Replies: 13
Views: 3218

Re: Clock Watchers In The Woods

I really like the poem as it is, with the reader needing to make the shifts in narrative voice and don't think it needs quotation marks. I also like the ambiguity in the last verse. Conflating granny and the child in the act of being bundled off to bed, suggests that granny is being infantalised by ...
by Keizer
Fri Sep 06, 2013 12:51 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Going Home- Brighton 28th August
Replies: 0
Views: 907

Going Home- Brighton 28th August

Going Home- Brighton 28th August by Keizer on Mon Sep 02, 2013 2:46 pm Oh I love to visit Leonard He's a saint and he's a sinner He's a clever bastard living in a suit. When he shares and tears his longing In his kneaded leavened song then life's a sweeter and less bitter kind of fruit. I take comfo...

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