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by Lion of Lions
Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:57 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: 50 KM (today's effort)
Replies: 16
Views: 2072

Re: 50 KM (today's effort)

WTF Lions, Crocodile is definitely tref (enjoy it and if and you are going to eat tref well then let its grease run down your chin as the saying goes). Unobservant myself I'll just say these past days of awe were for me both contemplative and productive. Good times for me anyway. I for my part had ...
by Lion of Lions
Sun Sep 27, 2009 6:23 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: 50 KM (today's effort)
Replies: 16
Views: 2072

Re: 50 KM (today's effort)

Lion of Lions wrote: >I hope your comment "the form will remain" was neither defiant nor defensive. [edit] My opinion . . . remains that it reads to me like chopped up prose and distracts from the meaning. Well, he obviously wants it all diced up and not in one big lump. I read "the form will remai...
by Lion of Lions
Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:32 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Goodbye Kiss (To Paradise)
Replies: 4
Views: 648

Re: Goodbye Kiss (To Paradise)

Thank you for writing this song about me.
by Lion of Lions
Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:30 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: 50 KM (today's effort)
Replies: 16
Views: 2072

Re: 50 KM (today's effort)

Folks before this gets further cocked up I'd like to clarify that the form will remain. This is how the words came to me. And I exercised considerable care in constructing it. Sure it will get massaged and pruned, once I gain a little distance from it. That is difficult because it is enormously per...
by Lion of Lions
Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:19 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: 50 KM (today's effort)
Replies: 16
Views: 2072

Re: 50 KM (today's effort)

Lion of Lions wrote: >I would say I was talking about poetry not circumcision. I have experience of the many poems of many men but my experience of penes is limited. I wonder if you can help in this area as you often talk cock, indeed I think you use it when you are stirring threads on this forum, ...
by Lion of Lions
Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:11 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: 50 KM (today's effort)
Replies: 16
Views: 2072

Re: 50 KM (today's effort)

Lion of Lions wrote: >The chopping into poetry is not convincing . . . What if he says he cut it up carefully with precision, then what are you going to say? I would say I was talking about poetry not circumcision. I have experience of the many poems of many men but my experience of penes is limite...
by Lion of Lions
Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:18 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: 50 KM (today's effort)
Replies: 16
Views: 2072

Re: 50 KM (today's effort)

Hello Jon, thanks for posting. It was very moving and raises important questions about religion but, imo, it should be prose. The chopping into poetry is not convincing, is just a distraction from your story. Happy New Year to you.
by Lion of Lions
Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:40 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Haiku Corner.
Replies: 504
Views: 80439

Re: Haiku Corner.

I thought the elephant was in your pajamas :? but you're right there does seem to be one cleverly hidden. elephant.jpg (edit: while talking about housework I said staked instead of stacked - may have been a freudian slip but not to worry hubby is safe and his papers are merely stacked and he has no...
by Lion of Lions
Sat Sep 12, 2009 4:28 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Haiku Corner.
Replies: 504
Views: 80439

Re: Haiku Corner.

Jimbo's Birthday, shhhh, it's the Uliphant in the room
by Lion of Lions
Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:38 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The Infinite Haiku
Replies: 1415
Views: 147228

Re: The Infinite Haiku

jimbo wrote:treat chemo patients
with love and blood oxygen
except your suprise

except your surprise
party where Leonard burst out
naked from your cake
by Lion of Lions
Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:23 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Flower
Replies: 26
Views: 3760

Re: Flower

Her parents were both bad spellers. They had actually intended to give Cate a "depraved" childhood.
by Lion of Lions
Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:52 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: The Infinite Haiku
Replies: 1415
Views: 147228

Re: The Infinite Haiku

Cate wrote:Holiday ever-
est tours features yeti
as a spa masseuse

DEDICATED TO LAURIE AND MANNA



as a spa masseuse
I'm under qualified to
treat chemo patients
by Lion of Lions
Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:47 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Flower
Replies: 26
Views: 3760

Re: Flower

Twenty Thousands Leagues Under The Sea
hiding from Laurie's
poetry
Captain Nemo
having Chemo
by Lion of Lions
Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:46 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Flower
Replies: 26
Views: 3760

Re: Flower

Alan Alda wrote:http://poemetry.blogspot.com/

Bite me!
8)
it's outrageous, your blog is just full of good things and full of people who really like you. how absurd is that?
by Lion of Lions
Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:01 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Flower
Replies: 26
Views: 3760

Re: Flower

Alan Alda wrote:sigh.
I can still do as I please on my blog...you're not my dad and can't tell me what to do!
stomp stomp stomp Door slam!
you come right back here, my girl. IF YOU BANG THAT DOOR ONE MORE TIME, YOU ARE GROUNDED FOR THE REST OF THIS MONTH.

DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME ??

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