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by In_betweenthegrey
Thu Mar 20, 2008 8:03 pm
Forum: The Summer Tour 2008
Topic: Leonard Cohen: TOUR 2008
Replies: 1010
Views: 312536

Re: Leonard Cohen: TOUR 2008

:lol: Whoo hooo I got tickets to the kitchener ontario show :lol: Im so happy
by In_betweenthegrey
Mon Mar 17, 2008 7:12 pm
Forum: The Summer Tour 2008
Topic: Leonard Cohen: TOUR 2008
Replies: 1010
Views: 312536

Re: Leonard Cohen: TOUR 2008

OMG OMG OMG I just found out leonard is coming to my hometown in kitchener ontario OMG! OMG! lol just way too excited for my own good
by In_betweenthegrey
Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:41 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: New poem

You confuse me with rainbows after the storm which is always constant. What hat should I wear today? What voice or non-voice can I allow my opinions to take? You're like coffee in the morning without the sugar and I'm suffocating on the aroma. And you know, my feet are still bleeding from the shells...
by In_betweenthegrey
Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:38 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: New poem

Lizzy, I liked what you did with the last stanza. I'm thinking a good book on how to write poetry may help me out alot as i know little about form. Via the context, it's not confusing to me what you mean by it; though I'm wondering if it might be, in any way, for others. You know one of the things t...
by In_betweenthegrey
Tue Nov 27, 2007 9:15 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: New poem

Stanza change You confuse me with rainbows after the storm which is always constant. What hat should I wear today? What voice or non-voice can I allow my opinions to take? You're like coffee in the morning without the sugar and I'm suffocating on the aroma. And you know, my feet are still bleeding f...
by In_betweenthegrey
Tue Nov 27, 2007 9:13 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: New poem

ok with jimmys punctuation (thank you jimmy) and added italics on the silent self talk, still need to come up with a title ....working on it...i could also change up the stanzas...hmmmm You confuse me with rainbows after the storm which is always constant. What hat should I wear today? What voice or...
by In_betweenthegrey
Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:38 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: New poem

yes i can understand that its similar in the way that i prefer some poetry over other poetry for instance I really enjoy shakespere's work i just can't stand reading some of it
by In_betweenthegrey
Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:13 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: New poem

Chris,

I will try to see what it is that i can do with those two lines that you pointed out the thing is that the eggshells are a silent thought (like something you would say in your head) and the coffee line is more directed at the person. maybe if I put the eggshells in italics? I am not sure here
by In_betweenthegrey
Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:03 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: New poem

Hey sure no problem if it makes it easier for you to read i can do that.

lol i believe i had a little pointer on that in a previous post i just did not understand that it was that important to that reader also i should let you know that i tend to leave out comma's and periods completely

Thanks
Tina
by In_betweenthegrey
Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:46 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

Re: New poem

Thanks no prob i just type i dont take the time on here to edit my I's or i's, also i'm not sure what you mean by pick my own style and stick with it? again much like my typing i just write i dont follow any particular style nor could i tell you what style it is that i write because in all honesty i...
by In_betweenthegrey
Mon Nov 26, 2007 7:54 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: New poem
Replies: 14
Views: 1633

New poem

You confuse me with rainbows after the storm which is always constant what hat should I wear today what voice or non voice can I allow my opinions to take How cruel it is that I feel I must play the part just to prevent tomorrows drama and you know, my feet are still bleeding from the shells of last...
by In_betweenthegrey
Mon Nov 26, 2007 7:49 am
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: ok i'll bite
Replies: 3
Views: 684

Re: ok i'll bite

Thank you Mat, I wrote that poem many years ago
San Juan de la Cruz. Poem: Dark night of the Soul is very interesting indeed i have never heard of it before do you know of anything else like this
by In_betweenthegrey
Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:41 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Group Therapy
Replies: 58
Views: 7047

Re: Group Therapy

Raggle, I too understand the sound of silence, of a voice that goes unheard, of being lost in my own private madness wondering if someday someone somewhere will find me in between the grey. thank you for sharing your heart and for showing those of us on here who may be lost and alone that we indeed ...
by In_betweenthegrey
Thu Nov 01, 2007 7:52 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Desire
Replies: 12
Views: 929

Re: Desire

thanks lizzy
by In_betweenthegrey
Thu Nov 01, 2007 7:40 pm
Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
Topic: Desire
Replies: 12
Views: 929

Re: Desire

I actually had a hard time with that one and originally titled it unfinished so i thought i would throw it out there so thank you for the challenge

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