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- Sun Jan 23, 2011 1:10 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: My pen dries in the outside world.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 842
Re: My pen dries in the outside world.
Lady, this was powerful...
- Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:52 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Emotions
- Replies: 2
- Views: 636
Re: Emotions
many verbs that sound strong
dynamic and intensive
thank you
dynamic and intensive
thank you
- Wed Apr 28, 2010 8:05 pm
- Forum: Other Writers and Writing
- Topic: the yellow bowl
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1794
Re: the yellow bowl
than you....enjoy together, may your loneliness lose its shape
- Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:18 pm
- Forum: Other Writers and Writing
- Topic: the yellow bowl
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1794
the yellow bowl
Rachel Contreni Flynn / Illinois/ The Yellow Bowl If light pours like water into the kitchen where I sway with my tired children, if the rug beneath us is woven with tough flowers, and the yellow bowl on the table rests with the sweet heft of fruit, the sun-warmed plums, if my body curves over the b...
- Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:42 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Woodpile
- Replies: 4
- Views: 797
Re: Woodpile
both literally and metaphorically, really strong childhood memory
lots of power, like it a lot, thanks
i
lots of power, like it a lot, thanks
i
- Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:48 am
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Tree
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2196
Re: Tree
Thank you, it was most poignant and attractive, with its strong rhytm and simple words... One almost sensually feels the loss, the fragility of life and living nature. ...reminds me michell's yellow taxi...would make a wonderful song... Good luck with writing great lyrics for great singer one day. i i
- Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:47 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: a singing orchid
- Replies: 3
- Views: 788
Re: a singing orchid
oh thanks cate
....and beware of vibrating flowers...
....and beware of vibrating flowers...
- Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:36 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: SECRET
- Replies: 4
- Views: 824
Re: SECRET
yes, it sounds like ancient wisdom.... Most people around here do not read wise books anymore, so we should be grateful for an opportunity to at least get a glimpse of their wisdom via poems or songs... Some guys complain that Leonard copies some ideas of Talmud or Psalms, but I think we should be g...
- Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:12 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: comfort of an honest friend
- Replies: 2
- Views: 640
Re: comfort of an honest friend
wise, thank you...I can imagine it as lyrics for Bruce Springsteen....or some sort of peaceful folk song on hardship of life....
- Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:07 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: SECRET
- Replies: 4
- Views: 824
Re: SECRET
wise and peaceful....could make a great song lyrics
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- Thu Apr 08, 2010 4:05 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: a singing orchid
- Replies: 3
- Views: 788
a singing orchid
(nothing much of literature....just something for your entertainment and education) “….you know what …..I bought a wonderful orchid yesterday. In the new garden center, Baumax….” my colleague Jane murmered, as she was typing some numbers into her Excel tables. “Must have been wonderful I guess” I u...
- Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:20 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: Leonard on cotton
- Replies: 4
- Views: 766
Re: Leonard on cotton
....but the eyes are so dramatically cohenish
thanks
il
thanks
il
- Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:16 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: speechless
- Replies: 2
- Views: 571
Re: speechless
an incredibly gripping poem, a crushing sense of drama
gives you real feeling of approaching someone dangerously attractive
thanks
i
gives you real feeling of approaching someone dangerously attractive
thanks
i
- Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:17 pm
- Forum: Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members
- Topic: When we are old
- Replies: 3
- Views: 487
Re: When we are old
I've really liked the sound effect of the two last stanzas...
hypnosis
hypnosis
- Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:03 am
- Forum: Other Writers and Writing
- Topic: cracked bell by Charles Baudelaire
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4470
Re: cracked bell by Charles Baudelaire
I'm really sorry, my deepest apologies... I've originally known the song in my own language, and then hunt for its English version on the internet. Quite mindlessly, I admit: I forgot to ackowledge the source as well as the translator. Next time I'll add more ethics to such research, I promise... I ...