This is the best poem I've read from this website. It flows nicely, has an intriguing theme, and makes good use of diction. The last stanza, however, I find breaks too suddenly via the introduction of the first person.

http://observer.guardian.co.uk/life/story/0,6903,573496,00.html Nick Paton Walsh Sunday October 14, 2001 The Observer He was the voice in every lonely boy's bedroom. The Godfather of Gloom. But after years on Mount Baldy, a Buddhist retreat, Leonard Cohen has finally found peace. Here he talks about...

Faith of Isaac Father, remember the day you took me to the hill. I always loved to play there, now I never will. I put my trust in you. To you I’d run, not hide. Then you tortured me as I lay upon my side. Father, what you did was cruel, though the angel saved my life. Now to your story another wiel...

Dear hal and everyone, I am terribly sorry, not to mention embarrassed, with regard to what happened to my entire post history. Unfortunately, I had mentioned my password to my (now ex) girlfriend who decided to take revenge on our recent break-up. I apologize for any irritation this might have caus...

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