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by peter danielsen on Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:04 pm
But beyond the darkness there is a hideous light
Which illuminate the impurities of your face
Your wrinkles and the red edge around your eyes
Bathed in this light you are motivated
To raise the bitter drink
And in the mirrror
you faintly see
an angel with the hand on the switch
...I ..... .... ....... made . ..... ...... by ....... music .. ..... .. ......
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by mat james on Thu Jul 26, 2012 1:38 pm
Great image Peter.
A bit like that red barrow of William Carlos Williams.
It is so contemporary, sadly.
Mat.
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." (Dark Night of the Soul, by San Juan de la Cruz)
""light is an invitation to happiness, " (Mary Oliver)
"optimism is the salt on the potato of life"
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by lizzytysh on Thu Jul 26, 2012 9:07 pm
Agreed!
Powerful images and implications.
Concise!
Well done, Peter!
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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by Byron on Thu Aug 23, 2012 3:20 pm
Mirrors are the curse of the withering classes......
"Bipolar is a roller-coaster ride without a seat belt. One day you're flying with the fireworks; for the next month you're being scraped off the trolley" I said that.
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