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by hophead on Wed Mar 14, 2012 3:42 pm
a fleeting thought
pools
as a single droplet of water
a luminous tear ebbs
a neglected son, a mocking daughter
a crimson blemish
taints asphalt
mingles,
shards of glass,
depressed steel
and jumbles of smoldering grass
trauma, pain
scars to heal
confusion, fear
they prey, they kneel
an indifferent moon postures,
a weeping mother mourns
squandered dreams
veiled
in a cloak of mystery
no last minute miracle
to mark history
no golden angel
taking flight
as the world stops turning
one candle snuffed out in the night
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by fishfishquaileye on Fri Mar 16, 2012 12:21 am
I'm thinking Coney Island amusement park! Am I right? It seems to me that you were describing the Big Parade but also I detected a tiny bit of negative emotion in the poem, as if your mind was wandering to something almost sad, like a family turning up on December 25th only to discover, for some unfathomable reason, the attraction was closed for the day. Anyway, good luck and I hope you make it safe to Coney next year!
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