complete the poem.....(Haiku)

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Postby George.Wright » Tue Aug 06, 2002 4:02 pm

Thanks for your comments..............it was a gathering of images that flashed into my head. As you can imagine, i don't adhere to conventions but go on emotions and feelings at a moment in time. The language as Guest pointed out is as conventional as cohen's writings.
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Postby stranger » Tue Aug 06, 2002 5:14 pm

thanks for pointing it out, guest. I always thought LC was never shy of using the 'fuck' word so what was the fuss about. Anyway, that word has existed in one form or other (verbal, chemical, whatever)since the first jelly -like creatures appeared. A very beautiful word.
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Postby Linda » Tue Aug 06, 2002 5:30 pm

You can't be serious!
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Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Postby solongleonard » Wed Aug 23, 2017 12:23 am

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Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Postby tom.d.stiller » Wed Oct 25, 2017 2:41 pm

You in the daylight
Dreamed of summer nights long gone.
Winter surprised you.
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Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)

Postby solongleonard » Wed Oct 25, 2017 9:25 pm

Winter surprised you
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