complete the poem.....(Haiku)
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Thanks for your comments..............it was a gathering of images that flashed into my head. As you can imagine, i don't adhere to conventions but go on emotions and feelings at a moment in time. The language as Guest pointed out is as conventional as cohen's writings.
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Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)
oh no!
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You in the daylight
Dreamed of summer nights long gone.
Winter surprised you.
Dreamed of summer nights long gone.
Winter surprised you.
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Winter surprised you
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night
http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night
http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/
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THEY MUST LEAD
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solongleonard wrote: ↑Wed Oct 25, 2017 9:25 pm Winter surprised you
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night
http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/
I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.
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THEY MUST LEAD
WHAT TRULY HORRIBLE LIVES
THEY MUST LEAD
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Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)
solongleonard wrote: ↑Sat Nov 18, 2017 3:58 amsolongleonard wrote: ↑Wed Oct 25, 2017 9:25 pm Winter surprised you
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night
http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/
I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.
I hope that's enough applause as my hands are getting tired now!
Should not smoke at night
Unless the sound of the pipe
Whispers your worship
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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Re: complete the poem.....(Haiku)
Karren B wrote: ↑Sat Nov 18, 2017 9:14 pmsolongleonard wrote: ↑Sat Nov 18, 2017 3:58 amsolongleonard wrote: ↑Wed Oct 25, 2017 9:25 pm Winter surprised you
cross-eyed albino bluesmen
should not smoke at night
http://ultimateclassicrock.com/johnny-w ... idnt-know/
I have thought about this short and soft and have unanimously agreed amongst myself that the haiku above is definitely probably the cleverest contribution for ever and longer since before. This objective biased view is supported by the lack of response and applause. All of you, if not more, are so awded that you can’t even whisper your worship. It’s ok, I will addyoulate some to the end of something inconvenient. That Winter verse was just fucking brilliant and Hugo and Geoff know it both ers.
I hope that's enough applause as my hands are getting tired now!
Should not smoke at night
Unless the sound of the pipe
Whispers your worship
Whispers, Your Worship
Not Guilty, I never scream
Neither fuckng swear
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Whispers, Your Worship
Not Guilty, I never scream
Neither fuckng swear
Neither fuckng swear
Nor take the oath that binds with
White bands and black silk
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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White bands and Black silk
Surprising cultural choice
but no colour Bar
Surprising cultural choice
but no colour Bar
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But no colour BarWhite bands and Black silk
Surprising cultural choice
but no colour Bar
So don bright scarlet robes and
Recline on the bench
'Take the breath of a new dawn
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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Recline on the bench
decline park keeper’s offer
and keep off the grass
Thank you for playing, Karren. I remember when poetry flourished here and now the posts either die or are dier.
The fresh faced may not get it and Old Geezers are past it.
here's to the new
who may not get what we do
and the oldies who don't even care
decline park keeper’s offer
and keep off the grass
Thank you for playing, Karren. I remember when poetry flourished here and now the posts either die or are dier.
The fresh faced may not get it and Old Geezers are past it.
here's to the new
who may not get what we do
and the oldies who don't even care
SOME PEOPLE NEVER GO CRAZY.
WHAT TRULY HORRIBLE LIVES
THEY MUST LEAD
WHAT TRULY HORRIBLE LIVES
THEY MUST LEAD
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Recline on the bench
decline park keeper’s offer
and keep off the grass
and keep off the grass.
the fool in spring dares tread where
angels fear to rush.
Yes, there were times when the bees were busy and the biz was buzzy around here.
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Angels fear to tread
out of pearly Bill Gates then
iCloud windows crash
out of pearly Bill Gates then
iCloud windows crash
SOME PEOPLE NEVER GO CRAZY.
WHAT TRULY HORRIBLE LIVES
THEY MUST LEAD
WHAT TRULY HORRIBLE LIVES
THEY MUST LEAD