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by **peterneedham** on Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:26 am

Should I write
to say
that I am alone
or should I embrace
this sanctuary
that offers creativity
with no parole?

Peter Needham

by **lizzytysh** on Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:33 am

That's interesting questioning, Peter. Forever locked in to creativity?

Lizzytysh

by **peterneedham** on Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:38 am

I have my book of poems
I hide behind it

by **lizzytysh** on Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:40 am

ahhh....gotcha.

by **peterneedham** on Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:49 am

I try to capture
the words for these lines
but there are no guarantees
that they are stolen
from a man
who has sentenced me
to thirty years
of longing
I hear the master sing
but I try to leave
before he goes clear
Sincerely P Needham

by **lizzytysh** on Sat Jul 13, 2002 12:55 am

Peter,
Nice blending and adapting of relevant phrases, so as to explain yourself.
~Lizzytysh

by **fishfishquaileye** on Fri Feb 17, 2012 2:49 am

peterneedham wrote:Should I write
to say
that I am alone
or should I embrace
this sanctuary
that offers creativity
with no parole?

Peter Needham

No

by **fishfishquaileye** on Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:04 am

fishfishquaileye wrote:
peterneedham wrote:Should I write
to say
that I am alone
or should I embrace
this sanctuary
that offers creativity
with no parole?

Peter Needham

No

YES!

by **lizzytysh** on Sun Feb 19, 2012 7:20 am

You're swimming waaaaaaaaay deep into the depths to net these, fishfish

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