I like this, Elazar.
A question: Line 3:
a) Was the speaker scorning the swivel of the hips
b) Or were the hips 'scornful' of the speaker... ?
Obviously if the latter, then the word should be scornful.
They both work, of course.
And I love 'cupid people' echoing stupid people.
Thanks for this.
One's life has value so long as one attributes value to the life of others, by means of love, friendship, indignation, and compassion.
~Simone de Beauvoir