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I hate you when you do that
different people hate many different things
so she fell around my neck
then she fell to the floor
then I fell in love for the little creature
tortured by our own hatered on the floor
I love you when you do that
different people love many different things
At the end we laughed about it all.
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this sounds like a true story,and i hope it was.regardless,great poem.
breath deep and live
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What original and delightful twistings and turnings of concepts, words, and images. It really becomes one that you want to analyze by its every word to see exactly what has just happened there, with the way you wrote it, to make it be what it is.
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