Prayers

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solongleonard
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Prayers

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Now this Forum is dead
and contains only the "work"
of non-writers stretching mediocrity
ghastly, self-indulgent
dull, useless,
an infuriating trespass on ground where once
artists dug and sometimes skipped,
now this Forum is dead
could the trespassers stop!
Could they write their best prayer
in memory of
Art
Leonard
Writing.
It will need you to think
of someone other than yourself
It will need you to delete
your
easy cliché
your simplistic rhyme
your pretentious crap
It will need you to work
so much harder than you normally do.
Good luck
to the posters
very good luck to the readers.
Now this Forum is dead.
SOME PEOPLE NEVER GO CRAZY.
WHAT TRULY HORRIBLE LIVES
THEY MUST LEAD
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Geoffrey
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Re: Prayers

Post by Geoffrey »

solongleonard wrote: This forum is now dead, and contains only the 'work' of non-writers stretching mediocrity. A ghastly, self-indulgent, dull, useless and infuriating trespassing upon ground where once artists dug and sometimes skipped. I repeat, this forum is now dead, so could the trespassers please stop!

Could you write your best prayer in memory of art, writing or Leonard? It will need you to think of someone other than yourself. It will need you to delete your easy clichés, your simplistic rhymes and your pretentious crap. It will need you to work so much harder than you normally do.

Good luck to the posters, and very good luck to the readers; this forum is dead!
what are you rabbiting about, solo? i know these talentless throwbacks are not reincarnations of shelley or ginsberg, but they're all jarkko has. yes, they do repeatedly respond to their own doggerel, and yes, that is indicative of an inability to connect with another person, but remember, you can't make a mohican hairstyle out of a friar tuck scalp. these are mentally challenged primates, you understand, from the shallow end of the gene pool, window-licking cave dwellers who's lips move when they read to themselves. it's just not their fault. satan will be living in an igloo before these hole diggers receive an application form from mensa, if you know what i mean. so cool it, please - and show a little respect, for mercy's sake!
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Gullivor
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Re: Prayers

Post by Gullivor »

So long,
You are mistaken.
Only the true artists remain here.
Gully
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
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